Very creepy. Reminds me of the monster from "The Second Coming" by Yeats.
I like the fact that you don't explicate what "it" is... keeps it interesting
"It delights" doesn't really impart any information... in what? In falling, or mimicking joy?
This sort of anthropomorphism of fear... does it have a purpose? Does this poem just say, "fear exists?" It doesn't need a moral or anything, but it should have some point other than describing something.
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